Thursday, November 1, 2007

traveling addiction

shooting out of the runway
up through the stratosphere
through
clouds, cumulus clouds
my thoughts race as i peer down to the
viens of the land that appear from
passing water year after year
up and away
to a place i've only seen in books
my life won't be the same and my
brain will never be able to find the words
to portray how i feel, what i see, what i know
reach out to touch..what? don't know. and i just smile

.euphoria.


3 comments:

Jon said...

That is awesome! The flow of both ways is so smooth and the imagery is amazing. Im going to post it on Joitumitch.

Nooy said...

Well Britt, I think I could have done it without the hint, but you seem on a roll! You just keep amazing me! Now let's add some paint to that tonight :D

Snowy said...

LOVE IT.

Aah, you are always so creative with how you write your poems. I never would have thought of writing a poem in two directions. Brilliant.